Sign Language: Hansen

ProjectProposalHelenHansen

You have a lot of interesting information in your wiki. And I really appreciate all the diagrams.

You have a lot of links to other websites, which is nice, but I think it might look better if you hypertext the name of the organization or what the link is about rather than the word "link." Also, I think your wiki reads more as a blog than a wiki at the moment. I think its because it isn't linked to itself yet, so all the information is written as a list.

I like your videos of people signing different songs. It shows that everything can be translatable for sign language, and that the deaf and hard of hearing may also enjoy the lyrics of the various songs. I would've liked to also see videos of original American Sign Language poetry, though, rather than just translations.

Keep up the good work.


Suspension Of: Syverson

ProjectProposalAdamSyverson


I really like how your blog is coming along. You're keeping up with it nicely and posting with each update, sometimes 2-3 times a day. I would like for some of these posts to be longer, and maybe a little more in depth though. Some music would be nice to go along with the posts as well.

I appreciated that you included information about every member of the band and your mascot on the "the guys" page. This makes sense to me because the blog isn't just about you, it's about your band.

It's cool that you added videos, but I think they could be organized better. Rather than just saying where you were performing, it would be nice to also know what songs you are playing, also add some space between the videos.

You have links to your personal blog and other sites pertaining to the band, but it would also be nice to see sites relating to any bands you guys are inspired by or have performed with.

Keep up the good work.



The World of Will: Drury

ProjectProposalSD


Wow...your blog is very organized. The fact that you are using categories helps your blog and its readers a lot. I liked your about pages because they provided just the right amount of information, and nothing unnecessary. Also, I enjoyed how you wrote about how you "discovered" Shakespeare. This is nice information for readers as they can reflect on how they first found enjoyment in reading Shakespeare or how they are still struggling with his works.

Your blogroll has some nice links and I especially appreciate your inclusion of the renaissance faire site. This may appear to be a random link, but it would be one that many Shakespeare lovers may want to check out in order to attend the festival.

Some of your blogs seem somewhat lengthy, but I think that that is okay. It would be hard, even next to impossible, to discuss some of these topics in a paragraph. I would like more links within you posts, however. More pictures would also add to your blog. Maybe you could include paintings of the characters, or pictures of actors and costumes. Pictures of settings would also work.

Keep up the good work.

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